I attempted to make it a little less top heavy as advised but didnt want the ‘Laurence King Red’ (a specific spot colour) to sit on the red I was using. SO I shifted it down. I also went for a completely random idea for the second image. This was inspired by a book and really ‘getting your nose into it’ so much so you only see the crease in the middle….
The last image I thought I’d use the word ‘twenty’ instead. Typeset in the classic ‘book font’ Baskerville
I might just enter one of these soon